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Missed Corners |
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Tomer Senior Member
since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168Michigan |
Glass seeps through, Onward to the lonely stare, Ripe with its founding mystique. Clashed in between its dance, Steps are misinformed by a chance, Triggered by its helping hand. Hands massaging its roots, Kindly filtrating their intent, Basking on their action. Lonely, yet empty, Curved shapely like its path, Beside the oceans mask. Crawls are taken, With fierceness when awaken, Cringing to its last cliff like edge. Missed glances, Around each drastic night, Seeps its way to its palms delight. A palm with a path, Corners were missed with each step it took. |
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Dragon Mistress Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 289Washington, USA. |
Wow, I like this! Tanya ~*~I'm only a dreamer, with broken dreams, and only words to fall back on~*~ |
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SilentTears Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 371Lost and Broken |
Hmm...I liked this very much. I think the word usage was perfect! Nice job. "I would sleep forever, if it meant I'd never stop dreaming..." |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
beautifully worded and written. But I can't quite tell what this might be about. Could you explain?  Lex |
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