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Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-08-13 01:43 AM

god,
what about me?

did i say things wrong
you take it that way.

i'm so angry
so full of hate
so overfilled with rage..

is it wrong..
is it wrong..

that i let myself bleed.

i have no time for questions,
you have no time to lie..
for i know..
i know..
when you do.

you have a way

i haven't the time for
your damn excuses..
just tell me why
all in one
all in one
maybe then

then maybe
i wont bite my own tongue.

someday
you'll understand
if i have to choke it out of you.

you'll get it

why it hurts

it hurts but
why..

is there no god..

god is there no
end
to the pain..
forever spent.

i spent forever

dwelling on this.

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

1 posted 2003-08-13 03:23 AM

Nice poem. I bet I could give you an answer to the question you ask about god. If you really want it e-mail me.

GIS

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

2 posted 2003-08-13 08:59 AM

Excellent!

Susan

Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

3 posted 2003-08-13 06:25 PM

wow, I'm a fan of your work. This is great. "maybe then, then maybe I won't bite my tongue." this line and others like it..made this poem unique. I loved it.

Lex

Lil OnE
Member

since 1999-12-14

Posts 234
Pasco County. Fl.

4 posted 2003-08-13 11:13 PM

I must agree with lexy. This was unique and it was deep. I liked it much!!! Great read!!

"No man is EVER worth my tears, and the only one who is will never make me cry"
~Lil OnE!~

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

5 posted 2003-08-14 12:40 PM

marry me..grins okay enough of that..but this is me..through and through..damnit

eor
Senior Member

since 2002-09-26

Posts 959
blues & greys

6 posted 2003-08-15 12:18 PM

i really like this one, adding this for sure...so powerful, so hateful, at yourself abd the one directed to...i really, really enjoyed this...

"in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums"

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

7 posted 2003-08-15 09:26 PM

ah...I have found another Jeremiad to add to me collection. Smile.

can't rant? Sure ya can.

You just did.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

8 posted 2003-08-16 02:36 PM

No, never an end - always hurting . . .
always learning . . . the answers lie within which sadly are often buried so deep we do not see them for a long time to come

nice vent
xxoo

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