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Fuzzy Conscious State
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Fuzzy Conscious State |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Still and calm You hear the wind and the night Ancient existence Placed in flesh and bone and blood Understand whats understood We're not eternal physically Death Release Fly soar walk Decisions we make No longer breathing Smells like freedom Haunting freedom Alone Others in this void of Existance, unaware, confused Fairness and cheap official thrill A waiting period began at birth Groups or singles at a time The ultimate only once Night and day constant flow Thicker and more, Roomy though Peaceful No war No lies Unless Satan sent Calvary of Hell And the fire of corruption In death they became the disease That plagues us all Mortal with immorality The roots of sin. |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Hey whoever reads this, could you give a suggestion about what I could have done between the 7th and 8th stanzas. It feels like its missing something. thanx,GIS |
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gringakiwi Member
since 2003-08-05
Posts 189 |
Hey- you could maybe explain a little more- I am afraid because I don't understand! (maybe thats the desired reaction?) Connie |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Its basically about what its like to be dead and what happens when dead. GIS a trickle of music from a well |
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