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Third Libra
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since 2003-08-10

Posts 125
South Carolina

0 posted 2003-08-12 09:24 PM

I
This diary of a madman
Is my only attempted escape
Into that of seclusion and reflection
Of my pure bitter hate.
I bathe under my ugly reflection
As it pulls me under and
Tears my soul apart.
But it heals me.
I am healing only from this
Utter distaste and blood.
Why keep a madman alive?

II
This diary of a madman
Paints the sky red and forlorn.
Salted tears rain from the sky
As God cries and we die.
Sliding across my conscience,
Like a blade,
Conquering my sanity,
Bringing upon the fires of hell
To wash over me and darkness nigh,
My fear blankets and destroys all good taste.
So taste me.

III
This diary of a madman
Is a mer de noms for my soul.
A requiem of sorrow and torture
For a pitiful soul ever so torn.
Maybe even a better funeral
Of hearts bitter and ever so torn.
But I need this place of nothing,
This place to heal a head caught by the Devil.
For the angel of death has caught me
Feverish and desperate.
Angel of Death, don’t take me away.

IV
Little angel go away.
Come back some other day.
Little angel go away
So I won’t feel so desperate
Ever, ever again any day.
Any day away from this place.
Away from this diary for sad men.
This dairy of a madman
Is a place of death for the dead.
A place for that only of madmen
Forevermore this diary of bad men
Pulls me under a place of souls in flames.

Love is only an excuse to hurt and to get hurt... Knowledge brings ye fear.

Lexia
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since 2003-07-20

Posts 111
Nowhere

1 posted 2003-08-12 10:08 PM

This is very interesting, like another story is being told. Great write.

Lexi

You may only be one person to the world, but you may also be the world to one person.

Kaoru

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since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

2 posted 2003-08-12 11:43 PM

Music is a form of life..

and it's inside of you..

your interpretation is nice,
and so is your point of veiw.

Third Libra
Member

since 2003-08-10

Posts 125
South Carolina

3 posted 2003-08-26 06:56 PM

Thank you both. I'm glad someone like it. hehe, music is of a great influence on my writing. Thanks again.

Love is only an excuse to hurt and to get hurt... Knowledge brings ye fear.

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