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Dark Poetry #3

Mind Escape

shytownboy
Junior Member

since 2003-08-06

Posts 14
Chicago

0 posted 2003-08-10 12:38 PM

As i sit alone in my thoughts,
Thinking about my life.
As the plan I had unravels right before my eyes.
The adventures I had planned, were like a towering cliff.
It seemed I had overcome.
Has now become a myth.
For once again I am stuck in the cell that's inside my mind.
Huddled in a corner with no life of any kind.
Just a 5X5 concrete room with no window or no dooor.
No way to see in, No way to see out.
No more adventures to explore.
Is there anyway out of this miserable pit that has now become my home?
Someway I can make a door to my cell so I am not so all alone.
I just need to keep looking inside myself and see what there is to see.
For I will stand astonished as I find, All the answers already lye in me.

KEEP FIGHTING

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

1 posted 2003-08-10 01:45 PM

True, so true. Nice poem.

GIS

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

Lexia
Member

since 2003-07-20

Posts 111
Nowhere

2 posted 2003-08-10 01:52 PM

Refreshing in a strange kind of way. Good work.

Lex

You may only be one person to the world, but you may also be the world to one person.

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