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cusick
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0 posted 2003-08-09 09:17 AM


His love wraps
me like a blanket,
keeping me safe
from outraged jibes
of  bigotry
in a world
where  black and white
are  an unnatural blend.


© Copyright 2003 cusick - All Rights Reserved
SharaRose
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1 posted 2003-08-09 01:08 PM


That warm blanket cures alot of what ails you like grandmas warm blanket comforts. This is sweet, and warmth is the one thing that seems to pull it all together when it seems so cold out there. I know just how this feels. Sending a for the memories this brought, and because I just like to hug. hahahaha
And for this title...I love black & white photos. When there is no color then your focus is on the subject...not the color...the subject is where my memories lay. Beautiful write here!!! Thanks for sharing.
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Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

[This message has been edited by SharaRose (08-09-2003 01:14 PM).]

cusick
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2 posted 2003-08-10 02:09 PM


Thank you Shararose, if there were more hugs the world would be a better place. Maggie
SharaRose
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3 posted 2003-08-12 05:48 PM


Thanks Cusick. You are so right. More love, and less hate.
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Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

green_itchy_stuff
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4 posted 2003-08-13 03:50 AM


The two of you are freaking cool.  And that poem, wow thats cool.  I enjoyed it.  And SharaRose-youre pretty smart to figure a black and white photo in to it.

GIS

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

SharaRose
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5 posted 2003-08-13 09:58 PM


Thank Itchy... That was nice.

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cusick
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6 posted 2003-08-14 10:28 AM


Thank you G.I.S for your comments. Maggie
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