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green_itchy_stuff
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0 posted 2003-08-07 10:55 PM



Plan and plot
Get the job done
Cycle
And a little light

Time invested
Well spent
Pratice
And a little hope

Strive against struggle
Disciplined self-control
Obstacle, Im driven
And a little more

I can do better
Pool of thought
Mechaines in motion
Energy in supply

Desire what I want
Where are they
Feed
Evil little grin

Pull to the surface
Exposed
Broad tiny mind
Insent balanced good

Wrong for sure
Without a doubt
Harvested and churned
Once and once more

Feel it slip away
A little everyday
Temptation and control
Has my rotten little soul

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

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Kaoru
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1 posted 2003-08-07 11:39 PM


amazing work.. I like your style.
green_itchy_stuff
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2 posted 2003-08-08 12:58 PM


Thanx.  I appreciate the compliment.

GIS

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

eor
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blues & greys
3 posted 2003-08-14 12:08 PM


goood one, sorry i was out of town so i gotta catch up, but i will tonight!!

"in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums"

green_itchy_stuff
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4 posted 2003-08-14 04:40 AM


its cool eor.  Im just glad you liked it.

GIS

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

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