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Dark Poetry #3

My House/ Father Knows Best

shytownboy
Junior Member

since 2003-08-06

Posts 14
Chicago

0 posted 2003-08-06 11:13 PM

World of violence, anger, and abuse,
Screaming, yelling, rage no way to defuse.
Mental scars deep in my soul embedded in my inner being,
For the future I am seeing.
World of violence, anger, and abuse,
Screaming, yelling, rage no way to defuse.
Across this plain I am about to comb.
I can still hear the screaming,
except.....This is my home.
The prophecies they say are true.
What was given unto father was given unto you.
Is there an end of this pattern to unfold?
Is it possible? This chain of events.
To stop the rage that was foretold.
In the climax we will see.
Just ask the kids that belong to me.

STOP THE VIOLENCE

SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

1 posted 2003-08-07 02:14 PM

Thanks for sharing this. It's better to get it on the outside instead of inside. I pray the cycle is broken.

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

2 posted 2003-08-07 10:09 PM

This was a kinder piece than I usually see here and had a darkness with a pinch of light at the end of the tunnel. Nice write.

GIS

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

devina
Member Elite

since 1999-10-28

Posts 3539
Cali

3 posted 2003-08-08 02:32 AM

WOnderful words you've penned here dearest...so glad to see you postin!!!

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

22NICK22
Member

since 2003-05-29

Posts 54

4 posted 2003-08-08 12:56 PM

this poem was almost as loud as the rabbit's scream

blackhalo
Member

since 2000-02-15

Posts 467
Denver, CO

5 posted 2003-08-09 11:48 PM

Pretty understandable flight. I disagree with one reply however, in that what is incurred on the outside generally has very profound inner effects as well. Well spoken, you brought a light to this subject that I do not often see. As to the prophecy? You have the power to change your future surroundings.
~Alicia~

[This message has been edited by blackhalo (08-09-2003 11:48 PM).]

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

6 posted 2003-08-10 03:05 AM

shy - this is one powerful write . . .
brilliant message
xxoo

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