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since 1999-11-25
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0 posted 2003-08-06 06:12 AM

Questions. I ask questions.
Pretending someone will answer.

But then somebody does answer.

Except that he
Doesn't understand the question
At all. And I can't rephrase
It. The thought
has passed away. Recovering
It would require me to
Stop dead. I can't
Afford that. Not right

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since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038
1 posted 2003-08-06 05:25 PM

hmmm..interesting. I like how you formated it. Like you almost couldn't believe it. Like you were just spouting off words. Good piece.

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since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx
2 posted 2003-08-06 05:33 PM

yeah being ignored does suck.

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

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since 2003-07-19
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3 posted 2003-08-07 02:25 PM

hehehe this made me think about that old saying...."just lay it down and come back to it later"'s not funny, but frustrating. It's just the way this came across made me kind of chuckle a little because I know a person that says he just lays it down and comes back to it later, and it's VERY good advice.

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

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since 2002-09-26
Posts 959
blues & greys
4 posted 2003-08-14 12:26 PM

poeple suck, i feel you sweetie...but dont give up on people there are some good ones out there...

"in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums"

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