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A New Look |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
It seems clear at first Blured vision Foggy Light headed It gets to that point where everything goes numb A little house in the midst of a giant city Population close to bust And yet there is no one to be seen Even a whisper seems to echo And yet they're everywhere A dark closet holds the biggest secrets Secrets revealed when one looks And remain secrets just the same Capture the flag and soar like an eagle Near extinct It doesnt take much Dropped and gone forever Outrageous it is. In the eye of the beholder A void in the reality of consciousness A quite life Credited by stone Buried Forever unknown a trickle of music from a well |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
"A dark closet holds the biggest secrets Secrets revealed when one looks And remain secrets just the same" keep the free verse comming greeny...loved this one, you just keep getting better and better! (adding this to library) "in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums" |
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Mad_Hatter Member
since 2003-06-29
Posts 393Canada |
Great write, very imagineative. Keep it up. |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Thanx guys. GIS a trickle of music from a well |
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Annie Junior Member
since 2003-07-23
Posts 42Seattle, WA |
Hey! Changed your mind? I am glad you did cause this is great stuff!!!!!! Hugs "Well I know, these voices must be my soul." -Dave Matthews- |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Thanx Annie. You're personality is cute. GIS |
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