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Mad_Hatter Member
since 2003-06-29
Posts 393Canada |
I knew that I loved you As soon as the bomb went off Dancing around you The atomic flames of the future Everywhere we go Watching as it all comes down The beginning of a new downgrade Failures of the past quickly remade Tinfoil stilts put into the microwave The gun has found a brand new slave I saw them all push through With their tanks blessed by god Grinding around me The bitter metal of the future Anywhere I am I watch the world burn down The beginning of a new downgrade Failures of the past quickly remade Tinfoil stilts put into the microwave The gun has found a brand new slave The sickly poison running through The iron fist crushing me and you All the little boys and little girls Bargained off like stolen pearls The beginning of a new downgrade We have failed CTRL-ALT-DELETE the future |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
interesting I must say, very intriguing. I liked the theme. ~Lex  |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
nice right a trickle of music from a well |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
nice right a trickle of music from a well |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
nice right a trickle of music from a well |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
nice right a trickle of music from a well |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
nice write a trickle of music from a well |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
i dont know what happened sorry a trickle of music from a well |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
great write, the ending kicked ass, i loved it... "in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums" |
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