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STRUGGEL WITH LIFE
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spritrider87 Member
since 2003-05-31
Posts 294NH |
STRUGGEL WITH LIFE as i struggel to work through my problems. i have to help others through theres. and when i fail. i tend to lose them. why am i so alone in this world? no one will help me. they just give up on me. what am i supposed to do? am i supposed to follow them? or do i continue to fight? whats the use? when no one wants me to stay on this earth. i dont think i should have been born. so why am i still here? ====================================== ok i was bored and a little upset in spanish class when i wrote this today. there is a pictuer that gose with it wich i drew but i dont have a scanner so if you want to know what it was just let me know in the replies and i will explain it to you. or at least ill try to. Lor this is in no way about you so dont even begin to blame yourself. Jian 8/01/03 "i am in troble but no one knows it if you can figure out my messages then help me. |
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spritrider87 Member
since 2003-05-31
Posts 294NH |
why wont people review this. its not fair. "i am in troble but no one knows it if you can figure out my messages then help me. |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Yeah people are slow at getting to review other peoples work at times. Ive written what I thought were some pretty good pieces, but......... ...you know. And if you want a critique. Try not to say everything right out and make the reader try and guess at what your talking about. And I think this is how to spell "struggle" GIS a trickle of music from a well |
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spritrider87 Member
since 2003-05-31
Posts 294NH |
oops i cant spell to well so yeah. your right. "i am in troble but no one knows it if you can figure out my messages then help me. |
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