Dark Poetry #3 |
in the arms of the angel... |
Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
take your words of comfort tuck them in your back pocket and let me drown within my thoughts trust me i know i'm not worthy of the air that we breathe let me just let me continously hit rewind on my favourite song I need some distraction... oh beautiful release... to slowly wither In the arms of the angel 'cos right now i can't find comfort in your friendship so fake so hollow take your thoughts shove them back beneath the rock you crawled under let me just let me find some peace tonight In the arms of the angel... If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. [This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (07-28-2003 06:17 PM).] |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
hmmm..I love that song as well. beautiful lyrics, I wrote them all out once. reading them over and over. This was good. ~Lex |
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Dark Kisses Member
since 2001-06-24
Posts 364Flat lands of Kansas |
Lovely, just lovely A friend, like a candle, is most needed in the darkness. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Oh, I can hear you singing this because they are thoughts within my own head indeed beautiful Kris xxoo |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
"and let me drown within my thoughts trust me i know i'm not worthy" this hit the spot, perfectly for me, beautiful, absoutly, darkly beautiful... "in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums" |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Ive felt that way before and its "times like that we learn to love again" at least long enough to actually say the words "I love you" and get it again. Nice write. |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Ah..K...and you've been missed as well.. this is a beauty. (letting me-self wallow in this a bit)...and um...pass that angel along eh? *wink* loved. loved, loved this hun.. take care! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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22NICK22 Member
since 2003-05-29
Posts 54 |
I like your Dionysian approach, yet it still contains a very Appolonian structure.... |
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Lexia Member
since 2003-07-20
Posts 111Nowhere |
Wow, I really like this. It rings so very true to me. Lex You may only be one person to the world, but you may also be the world to one person. |
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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
A fine self purge here Ceinwyn, very well expressed, and containing more than a few personally revealing thoughts. coyote |
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blackhalo Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467Denver, CO |
Very gripping! This piece was much enjoyed... In fact, I think I'll go read it again. |
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