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mysticpoe
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since 2003-02-28
Posts 883


0 posted 2003-07-28 11:39 AM


On days
when brightness allows
you follow me
you in the corner, that space
so comfortably shrouded
but, you never speak
I know
why speak, when our
caravan's dust travels endless
as you
with that lofty touch
follow, as to know
such things
so,
you visit
like was told in a script
open the door, so full of chances
so full of -
where the winner's go
to know
life can't lose with
a halo mask trying.

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

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wranx
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since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn
1 posted 2003-07-28 11:58 AM


The halo-mask...yes, I've deen those.


Done well, poe


~wranx

"I've lost all I can...now, it's your turn"


eor
Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959
blues & greys
2 posted 2003-07-28 01:15 PM


"On days
when brightness allows
you follow me"

and yet again, your words relate so well to my life, i just love reading your poetry...sometimes it makes me not want to post because your words are so much more beautiful and meaningful than mine.

yet again, poe, another surpurb write...

"in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums"

mysticpoe
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since 2003-02-28
Posts 883

3 posted 2003-07-29 07:52 AM


wranx and eor, Thanks again my friends.

mysticpoe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

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