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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
More space to fit the dead Accident burning red Auto equipment all around Stand silent behind the mound Debris collage in the air Cold and silent solid stare Inventory down supply Ill prepared infections fly Run Run vision weak Slow and lost cut the meek Itchy feeling conscious state Hurt collide exceeding rate Cohernet blur ceilling white Erotic madam sponge polite Soft and blue comfort steel Baise and milk blood conceal Stablize continue happy numb Cotton sky I think Im dumb Promises guaranteed the best Glossy eye in eternal rest |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Liking the "debris collage"...cool image! ~wranx |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
very nice, loved the imagery you made with in this poem...very neat way to describe during and after the event... "in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums" |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
stand silent behind the mound. I like this line. Vague for thought, but powerful in many ways. great writing. mysticpoe If nothing is something |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
I can't help but smile at you guys compliments . Thanx, GIS |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
Stabilize contiune happy numb cotton sky I think I'm dumb I loved that part. You have a way with words. ~Lex...  |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Thanks Lex, Its cool knowing people enjoy my poetry. GIS a trickle of music from a well |
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