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Dark Kisses Member
since 2001-06-24
Posts 364Flat lands of Kansas 
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He hides behind the shadows Of his past and present pain Lurking at the bottom Not wanting to ever gain Caught up in his own world Feeling pity from all around Little does he realize A future will never be found He threw all his chances Far Far Far away Living in his dream world Where the sky is dark and gray Maybe he feels safe Moving underneath the rock Hiding his heart from others Not wanting to unlock hmmmmmmmm......... Maybe I could try it Hide from all the future pain Stay within my darkened world And never gain the fame A friend, like a candle, is most needed in the darkness. |
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Dark Kisses Member
since 2001-06-24
Posts 364Flat lands of Kansas |
Don't worry, I would never give up on anything. I just wish some people would have the strength to live within the present. And stop looking so much in the past and judging others for it. Everyone is different and should be treated as such..................................................................................................... A friend, like a candle, is most needed in the darkness. |
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Silent Evincar Member
since 2003-07-22
Posts 179Here There and Places Between |
Ohhh very nice and I might be wrong(I have bad habits),but there seems to almost be a moral to the story. Interesting, but then again one mans trash is anothers treasure. Nicely done.... NJS |
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Dark Kisses Member
since 2001-06-24
Posts 364Flat lands of Kansas |
So true.... you can read between the lines well |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
nice write, but it is not alwyas easy to come out of a hell you created for yourself, but very easy to slip into it... "in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums" |
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Dark Kisses Member
since 2001-06-24
Posts 364Flat lands of Kansas |
I agree, but nothing is easy in this world. But if we really want something, we must fight for it. Once you give up.... well..... all is lost |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
very very true, you can't give up, even though sometimes it seems like the easy route.. "in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums" |
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