»
Archives
»
Dark Poetry #3
»
The Package
| Dark Poetry #3 |
|
The Package |
|
|
missmisery61 Member
since 2003-07-08
Posts 56 |
I examine the unfurnished shell bent slightly, bare back facing me Contemplating my existence Sad, exhausted and hollow Much like the shell Dark arms reach out in sweet emancipation Obediently, I drown in its comfort But all too quickly Reality waterfalls inside my window Comforted no more Numb feet touch a surface Of what they take for granted to be the floor Confronted cruelly by the days necessity Robotic movements know the way Calculated breathing Artifical darkness, my final benefit Before the metal curtain unveils A neatly wrapped package Complete with bow So lord I see you grinnin' must be grand always winning....AIC |
||
| © Copyright 2003 sherry - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
Magia_negra Member
since 2003-07-16
Posts 77CA, USA |
I liked the images in this one, somewhat confusing but very vivid. Nice write ...somos los locos para siempre |
||
|
missmisery61 Member
since 2003-07-08
Posts 56 |
Magia_negra Thank you for taking the time to read my poem. I must admit that I'm a bit selfish when I write, as I am expressing what I am feeling at the time without regard for anyone who may read it. That is something I really need to work on. The unfurnished shell is of course, someone lying next to me. Dark arms represents the evening darkness. Reality waterfalls is the morning sunlight. Articfical darkness, my garage, and the metal curtain, my garage door. What I'm trying to say in this piece, is that the package represents what I allow the world to see, a person who seems to have it all together. However, a lot of the time, the contents are very much broken. Thanks again for the response. So lord I see you grinnin' must be grand always winning....AIC |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
