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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2003-07-12 11:07 PM


Leftover Thoughts

I thought I could live without her
because so many days were spent
apart from her anyway.

I thought I could smile, but I
couldn't smile with her away.

I couldn't stop thinking of her
silky black hair and all the magic
moments that we once had shared.

I thought I wouldn't miss her
but nary a day passed without
my yearning to kiss her.

I thought I wouldn't cry.
Cry just because she said goodbye?

And then pain set in
and I wanted to die.

JamesLee
July12
2003



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Bruised
Junior Member
since 2003-07-12
Posts 13
Indiana, USA
1 posted 2003-07-13 01:14 AM


Hmm ... chicks are like that.

~ Tenshi

"If it's too loud, you're too old!" - A Rock Artist

Rosebud1229
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since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813
North Carolina
2 posted 2003-07-13 03:20 PM


very sad James, I can tell your a hopeless romantic, whatever that really means I don't know. Very nice writing though
EagleOne
Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...
3 posted 2003-07-14 06:06 AM


Very well put!

And now she's in me, always with me, tiny dancer in my hand ~ Bernie Taupin

Jeremiah Johnson
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since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S
4 posted 2003-07-15 12:34 PM


this is a great work of art and it's also great to get on here after so long and see old faces and old friends. reason being i'm in the army.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-


MellonCollie
Member
since 2003-04-11
Posts 117
Austria,Europe
5 posted 2003-07-15 05:12 PM


great one James...
And then pain set in
and I wanted to die.

so true and so sad

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