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TwoSided
Junior Member

since 2003-07-06

Posts 19

0 posted 2003-07-10 06:44 PM

*Note* This is alittle harsh nothing to bad just be warned.

It meant nothing,
But it was some thing,
One night doesn’t mean much,
I’m sure your brains about to bust,
I didn’t mean to take that place,
In your bed and in your heart,
But I’m there now,
Trapped, caught in this deadly snare called love,
I didn’t mean to be the person you wake up to,
I didn’t want to make you think I cared,
But I took that dare,
It was a lie,
Fake and empty,
But you don’t care,
As long as I’m there beside you,
I want to leave you,
I don’t want to have to stare at that tare in my heart,
I  don’t want to leave,
Because I know I’ll hear your tears falling on the tiled floor,
But to you I’m just a peace of flesh,
You winde your fingers through my hair and try to make me care,
But the tare in my heart  bleeds filth into the air,
The roofs leaking tears,
The floorboards creek with years of ware,
The air is stale with decay,
I want to leave this place,
But I can’t I ‘m not that cruel,
If I could leave I would,
I’d open the door in my mind,
And close the tare in my heart,
I’ll stay beside you for one last night,
But when you wake up I won’t be there,
I’ll be dead on the floor,
I’ll be a chrisom pull of memories,
No need to Barry me I’ll rot away,
No need to weep I’ve shed enough tears over these dusty years,
These memories in your head are long dead;
Find another lover for your bed,
Another Angel lost and Dead,
I won’t worry,
I won’t care,
There’s no need to despair,
I’m free drifting in the air,
I’m the dust,
I’m the frost,
I’m the lost child,
No need for me,
No need for you,
Were all dead,

The End

Rosebud1229
Senior Member

since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

1 posted 2003-07-10 11:24 PM

very emotional write, awesome though

dertah
Senior Member

since 2003-06-18

Posts 584

2 posted 2003-07-11 02:09 PM

very nice, cherreo now.

eor
Senior Member

since 2002-09-26

Posts 959
blues & greys

3 posted 2003-07-11 05:28 PM

emotional indeed, deep powerful wirte, i liked how you slipped the name in there too...

"in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums"

TwoSided
Junior Member

since 2003-07-06

Posts 19

4 posted 2003-07-11 05:33 PM

Thanks to all of you...I write how I feel it's like bleeding out emtions....they stain so many things in a persons life..*sighs* Such a pitty.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2003-07-12 05:58 AM

Nice bleeding out of the emotions...heh, I'm not dead...really liked the title...James

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