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Dark Kisses
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since 2001-06-24
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Flat lands of Kansas

0 posted 2003-07-09 03:42 AM



Looking into the sky so blue
While feeling the wind upon my face
Searching for the love so true
Noticing the colors of this place

Knowing the man behind the rock
Is scared to look into my eyes
Yet there to dry my tears
Of all the nights I cry

Scared of losing something
Something I never really had
Nervous to admit it
Without feeling bad

Tempted to let go
Hoping it will come back to me
But knowing it may run
For all the world to see

Knowing the heart must lead
Taking chances just to win
Forgetting all the past mistakes
Forgiving all our sins

Getting past all the nervousness
A simple hug can always cure
Moving past the hands of time
Reaching something that is pure

Pure enough to save us
Creating smiles all around
Follow the beat of your heart
It might lead you to the sound

The sound of many colors
That comes from down within
The laughter of your voice
The movement of my pen

Knowing it may all end
By the end of this write
Hoping the sun shines through
Making the future bright

Not knowing how it ends
Of a lifetime love affair
Yet just telling you how I feel
And that I truly care

The doors are always open
Into the future I must flee
Take a chance on love
Now wouldn't you agree?

A friend, like a candle, is most needed in the darkness.

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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2003-07-09 06:10 AM


Yes I agree everyone should take a chance on love...but only reasonable chances...James
Dark Kisses
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since 2001-06-24
Posts 364
Flat lands of Kansas
2 posted 2003-07-09 01:24 PM


And you can determine a reasonable chance how when it comes to love?

A friend, like a candle, is most needed in the darkness.

eor
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since 2002-09-26
Posts 959
blues & greys
3 posted 2003-07-09 03:53 PM


no, you can not determime a reasonable chance when it comes to love...all you can do is try...better to love and lost then to not love at all...right?

"in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums"

Dark Kisses
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since 2001-06-24
Posts 364
Flat lands of Kansas
4 posted 2003-07-09 05:05 PM


I agree
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