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Alnilam Member
since 2003-07-04
Posts 75 |
Sorrow surrounds and suffocates all my being Suffering surmounts and seeps into my sould Frightening fears bind my whole self Anxious adrenaline runs through my veins Falling fast into an abysmal void Emptiness encompasses everything within Wondering when it will end Wondering when will I be free? Free from the feelings of failing and falling Free from the feelings of fear or surmounting sorrow Fiery fantasies far from the truth Hurt and haunt me As I relentlessly relive my mistakes Sadly surrendering myself to sorrow Repeatedly repenting all I have wronged When will it be over? When will it be ok? When will some happiness thaw my cold heart? When will sorrow depart this devastated being? And yet how deeply devoted I am to my sorrow So sorry for failing everyone I love So sorrowful in my heart, in my being I will right all my wrong. Give me some advice or feedback please!  ~*Alnilam*~ "The worst tragedy for a poet is to be admired through being misunderstood." [This message has been edited by Alnilam (07-07-2003 10:00 PM).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
The way to right all the wrong we have done is to work past the sorrow and regret and to do all within our power to not repeat the mistakes of our past...if you can't redeem yourself in old relationships you redeem yourself through new relationships...James |
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