Dark Poetry #3 |
devouring you |
dertah Senior Member
since 2003-06-18
Posts 584 |
i want to feast on your flesh, absorb your heart because it should be mine, feed on your eyes, eat your lips, dine on fine hands that should caress only me, consume your breasts, and devour your soul, your soul...the only soul, my one chance at heaven from hell, my deliverance, my salvation, my hope, hope that my life, might continue without you |
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Purple Poet On Wheels Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 145Pittsburgh/Edinboro, PA |
WOW This is the darkest love poem I've ever read and I LOVE IT cheers, PPOW |
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Dark Kisses Member
since 2001-06-24
Posts 364Flat lands of Kansas |
One word...... "Wonderful" |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
HMM... I taste best with salsa. |
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Enotneicna Member
since 1999-06-06
Posts 340Oakland, Or, USA |
excellent write!!!!!!!!!! Words are my medicine. |
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colifer Junior Member
since 2003-09-20
Posts 37Ohio |
Now this is one of the best poems i've read. looked you up since you keep doing me the same consideration and i loke your stuff ALOT. i don't like dark much but this one was absolutely fantastinc. It's your IDEAS that i REALLY like! |
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