Dark Poetry #3 |
Lost Friendships |
liqwidnik Junior Member
since 2000-11-04
Posts 33Mantua, NJ, USA |
*This is dedicated to Gin one of the best friends I had even if it was just for a short while She's been through a lot and I just want her to know that I'm still and always will be here for her* Friends are gone Their friendships have been lost Imiss them Those people The comfort they offered Now is the time for me to return that The comfort and friendship Unfortunately they don't want it When the time is right those friends may return for now I just sit and wait for those friendships that were lost for the day they will return Don't tell me that you love me unless you mean it cuz I might do something crazy like believe you. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Nice work Nicole!! But don't sit and wait, or your friend shouldn't either, there are always new friends and loves to be made, everyday you/or she sit you lose a possibility... Isis *War produces one thing - Cemetaries. And in cemetaries there are no enemies!* ~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit. |
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mystic requiem Member
since 2001-01-26
Posts 144 |
I wish you the best in all things. Good poem!! *thanx* |
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Jeremy Redinger Junior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 46 |
It hurts when someone you care about is going through 'rough times', and it hurts even more when there's nothing you can do to help. Your poem was wonderful, both in the way it made me feel inside, and in how sincere it is. I wish you, and your friend luck. Keep writing poetry too I'm definately going to keep reading |
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liqwidnik Junior Member
since 2000-11-04
Posts 33Mantua, NJ, USA |
Thank you guys all for replying I appreciate all the comments, and stuff thanks again! Don't tell me that you love me unless you mean it cuz I might do something crazy like believe you. |
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Temptress*Moon Member
since 2001-01-15
Posts 240Long Island, NY |
This was a nice dedication*S* Great job! temptress*Moon I slept and dreamed that life was beauty was thy dream then a shadowy lie? -ESH- |
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