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Midnitesun
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0 posted 2003-06-21 12:44 PM



Man speaks with forked tongue.

Not the same meaning these days.

Bawdy enhancements.

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littlewing
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1 posted 2003-06-21 01:00 PM


I completely understand this . . .

Midnitesun
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2 posted 2003-06-21 01:44 PM


Yes, I figured you would.
I think it's gross, andan insult to the human body. I am too much of a 'naturalist' and into wholistic and holistic health for this new-age 'body enhancement' crap.

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3 posted 2003-06-21 01:57 PM


Yes there seems to be a lot of this going on today. Times haven't changed, really. But what happens down the road when their tongues and their bodies begin to speak back?
Thought conveyed very nicely. Enjoyed.

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[This message has been edited by mysticpoe (06-21-2003 01:58 PM).]

Bridget Shenachie
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4 posted 2003-06-21 08:21 PM


Midnitesun--

You are right on target and you nailed it with 'bawdy enhancement.'  Thanks for posting this!

Shenachie

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5 posted 2003-06-21 09:59 PM


Mystic, thanks for reading and commenting on this piece. Yes, and can you really picture this guy with the forked tongue at age 80? I find the whole thing bizarre. but then again, I also am not into the more traditional body enhancement surgeries either.

Bridget, THANKS! Glad you appreciated that word choice.

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6 posted 2003-06-23 12:10 PM


well done
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7 posted 2003-06-23 02:40 PM


Thanks, Brad.

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