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Addiction |
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Forgotenandgone Member
since 2003-05-07
Posts 52NC |
Once turned into many Many turned to addiction Addiction is where theres no turning back no turning back to the life you once had everything changes patterns change, feelings, and the mind The mind is a cave wrapped around and consumed Consumed to the point where you are rotting inside and out rotting of knowledge rotting of honesty and rotting of faith Faith is somthing you have once this once in a time thing is a delicate scale so delicate that one pock or pull in the wrong direction could set you off at anytime.......theres no turning back..... |
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kadafi09 Member
since 2003-06-17
Posts 143California, United States |
all this is very true of all addictions. well said. good poem. |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
good write, i liked it. honest, raw emotion spilling out... |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
I like the way you let it go here. Write more. Powerful poetry. mysticpoe |
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BrokenDreams Member
since 2003-02-09
Posts 425In The Clouds |
Well said. I know what you mean. If you listen hard enough silence can mean more than words. |
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poet25 Junior Member
since 2003-06-17
Posts 18PE, Canada |
The poem began slowly but as you progressed your words began to harbour true emotion |
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