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Eddie New Member
since 2003-06-09
Posts 8 |
(this is a working progress, just some thoughts i wrote down) Thinking, Choosing, Loosing my mind Cutting, Bleeding, Needing your love. Caring? Loving? Shoving me away Emoitions, Relinquish, Extiguish my flame, Hurtful, Felling, Dealing with my pain. Hating, YOU, Do you CARE? |
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RedStoneEB Senior Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 772uk |
i liked that one really flowed to my mind my mind is like a dream sometimes confusing |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
Bless Your Heart! Tima C.  If you cant get rid of the skeletons in your closet, you'd best teach them how to dance. George Bernard Shaw |
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princessdani3122 Junior Member
since 2003-05-14
Posts 18 |
I really liked it , sometimes I have so many feeling running through me at once ... that was a really good poem to describe them Danielle |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
nice write, i have often felt like this too... "the blood red flows like thoughts from my head, never to be read, forever to be dead" but anyways i like you style too, i sometimes write in that style [This message has been edited by eor (06-15-2003 03:06 PM).] |
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