Dark Poetry #3 |
This world and Broken soul |
PoetOfDarkness2002 Junior Member
since 2002-12-06
Posts 41Lost in my dissociative unrealistic world |
This World Life can be hard Life can be rough The world is full of (edited by moderator) But I can be tough People can treat me bad Life can make me really mad Rape and murder, Hate and gangs Is this world always gonna be the same? Love is distant, so it seems Violence, killings, stolen dreams Silent cries, ignored screams Love and caring out the window in a breeze Killed Bodies, Stolen souls Weapons now as simple as poles Nobody cares about their neighbors But they all know that they are truly able. The world is what makes life so hard Not the way you play the cards. (c) manda 2003 Broken soul Broken soul All alone Want to run No place to go Want this pain To be gone And find a place Where I belong Don't have the strength To go on Living in a broken home Tired of fighting A hopeless scene In this house of poisened memories Mom dont care If I die I want to laugh But I want to cry Please somebody come rescue me From this terrible misery. (c) manda 2003 ~*Manda*~ [This message has been edited by Local Parasite (06-01-2003 07:18 PM).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Lots of feelings coming through in these. I hope you can see an end to this darkness because it is there. Rescue comes when you least expect it. Nice write. Marilyn. |
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PoetOfDarkness2002 Junior Member
since 2002-12-06
Posts 41Lost in my dissociative unrealistic world |
ty and ty...there is a lot of feelings in these...the first one is jus my observation about the world we live in and how i've come to realize that if the world as a whole would jus stop being hateful and all that crap i really think there would be less crimes such as rape and murder..and broken soul is more about my current home situation...and if anyone is interested in knowing more about that part of my life u could email me...but i gotta run, wonderful *cough cough* family get together today.. blessed be, Manda |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
these are good pieces. I recomend putting the peices in separate posts so each can recieve the attention it deserves. |
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MellonCollie Member
since 2003-04-11
Posts 117Austria,Europe |
nice writings...i like the first poem better, but this doesn't mean that i didn't like the second one Love is distant, so it seems i love this line how will i laugh tomorrow |
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