Dark Poetry #3 |
Dread Friends |
teenpoet Member
since 2001-10-17
Posts 280Michigan |
Ahh..... You claim to be my friends say you'll always be there I believed you Once.... so long go now It seems But you lied to me Abandonded me Betrayed me You told my secrets and my fears Filleted me I know not how I can still with sound mind And even voice Claim you among my friends Oh you callous fools And I such a simpleton To believe you friends In the first place |
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BrokenDreams Member
since 2003-02-09
Posts 425In The Clouds |
I'm sorry that you have "friends" that did that to you. I'm thankful that I don't. I hope you find some people that will truly love you for you, and that they will love you fully and completely. No one deserves to be treated like that, especially by the ones they trust. Take care. Jenni |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
excellent work here. . . there will always be those who do not understand. . . and yes, there will always be those who do. . . find them, and they will find you. . . ------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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MellonCollie Member
since 2003-04-11
Posts 117Austria,Europe |
sad topic but great work... how will i laugh tomorrow |
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eminor_angel Member
since 2003-05-22
Posts 323Canada |
I love the line about being filleted. Awesome imagery man! Never stop writing, its smashing good free therapy. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
But you lied to me Abandonded me Betrayed me You told my secrets and my fears Filleted me Nobody should be treated this way, and least of all by so-called friends. A person who treats you like this is really no friend of yours. A true friend cares for you unconditionally. I like to say that my friends love me "in spite of myself". Thank you for this heart-felt write. Hugs to you, Ethel |
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spritrider87 Member
since 2003-05-31
Posts 294NH |
you are a relly talented writer. i know how you feel i have had friends turn on me befor too. if you ever need to talk im here. e-mail ma [email protected] see you around. i am in trouble but no one knows it if you can figure out my messages thenhelp me. |
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