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teenpoet
Member

since 2001-10-17

Posts 280
Michigan

0 posted 2003-05-22 10:37 AM

Ahh.....
You claim to be my friends
say you'll always be there
I believed you
Once....
so long go now
It seems
But you lied to me
Abandonded me
Betrayed me
You told my secrets and my fears
Filleted me
I know not how
I can still with sound mind
And even voice
Claim you among my friends
Oh you callous fools
And I such a simpleton
To believe you friends
In the first place

BrokenDreams
Member

since 2003-02-09

Posts 425
In The Clouds

1 posted 2003-05-22 11:56 AM

I'm sorry that you have "friends" that did that to you. I'm thankful that I don't. I hope you find some people that will truly love you for you, and that they will love you fully and completely. No one deserves to be treated like that, especially by the ones they trust. Take care.
Jenni

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

2 posted 2003-05-22 12:40 PM

excellent work here. . .

there will always be those who do not understand. . . and yes, there will always be those who do. . . find them, and they will find you. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

MellonCollie
Member

since 2003-04-11

Posts 117
Austria,Europe

3 posted 2003-05-22 02:08 PM

sad topic but great work...

how will i laugh tomorrow
when i can't even smile today

eminor_angel
Member

since 2003-05-22

Posts 323
Canada

4 posted 2003-05-22 10:17 PM

I love the line about being filleted. Awesome imagery man! Never stop writing, its smashing good free therapy.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

5 posted 2003-05-25 03:36 AM

But you lied to me
Abandonded me
Betrayed me
You told my secrets and my fears
Filleted me

Nobody should be treated this way, and least
of all by so-called friends. A person who
treats you like this is really no friend of
yours. A true friend cares for you
unconditionally. I like to say that my
friends love me "in spite of myself".

Thank you for this heart-felt write.
Hugs to you,

Ethel

spritrider87
Member

since 2003-05-31

Posts 294
NH

6 posted 2003-06-01 03:53 PM

you are a relly talented writer. i know how you feel i have had friends turn on me befor too. if you ever need to talk im here. e-mail ma spritrider87@yahoo.com see you around.

i am in trouble but no one knows it if you can figure out my messages thenhelp me.

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