MIIM (Man to Machine) Part 3

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Dark Poetry #3

MIIM (Man to Machine) Part 3

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

0 posted 2003-05-22 01:43 AM

I shadow out the anger,
What is left-
is objective,

No decisions to be made,
For I have not choice,
Only to accept…

I convince a man-
Stop dwindling,
And let go,

You are the one,
Who became-
A machine,

From a man.

[This message has been edited by Xeonox (05-22-2003 01:44 AM).]

AlostHeart
Member

since 2003-05-01

Posts 78
Wisconsin, U.S.

1 posted 2003-05-23 12:03 PM

HUH????

Dont ever love a guy that will never love you back, no matter how hard you try.

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

2 posted 2003-05-23 01:27 PM

Read the first two part of MIIM (man to machine).

ffpercent243
Junior Member

since 2003-05-04

Posts 37
United Kingdom

3 posted 2003-05-24 04:05 PM

Certainly a poem to read many times! It's flow was like a story unfolding, the lid to seal the gold.

BrokenDreams
Member

since 2003-02-09

Posts 425
In The Clouds

4 posted 2003-05-24 10:41 PM

Added to the other parts this was really good. If I might make a suggestion...if I were you I would post all three parts on one page so people that haven't read all of them can get the whole effect...Again just a suggestion.
Jen

Every oak tree started out as a couple of nuts who stood their
ground. --Anonymous

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