Dark Poetry #3 |
MIIM (Man to Machine) Part 3 |
Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
I shadow out the anger, What is left- is objective, No decisions to be made, For I have not choice, Only to accept… I convince a man- Stop dwindling, And let go, You are the one, Who became- A machine, From a man. [This message has been edited by Xeonox (05-22-2003 01:44 AM).] |
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AlostHeart Member
since 2003-05-01
Posts 78Wisconsin, U.S. |
HUH???? Dont ever love a guy that will never love you back, no matter how hard you try. |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
Read the first two part of MIIM (man to machine). |
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ffpercent243 Junior Member
since 2003-05-04
Posts 37United Kingdom |
Certainly a poem to read many times! It's flow was like a story unfolding, the lid to seal the gold. |
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BrokenDreams Member
since 2003-02-09
Posts 425In The Clouds |
Added to the other parts this was really good. If I might make a suggestion...if I were you I would post all three parts on one page so people that haven't read all of them can get the whole effect...Again just a suggestion. Jen Every oak tree started out as a couple of nuts who stood their |
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