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xmutexelationx Junior Member
since 2003-05-16
Posts 15AmongstTheCharredFieldsOfSnow |
Just yesterday you loved me and could never have enough, but today I'm hurting you and you want out again? I haven't done a thing and somehow I'm ripping you apart. How do you think I feel? How do you think it feels to watch you walk away again? I've fallen asleep next to the phone, thinking your mind may change, but I don't think I'll be hearing your voice again. I haven't smiled once since I saw you turn your back on me. How do you think I feel? How do you think it feels for me to lose you once again? I keep crying,hoping memories will bleed out from my eyes, but I don't think I'll ever be purified again. I've haven't been sleeping, 'cause my mind Is set on you. How do you think I feel? How do you think it feels to have you eating at my brain again? Everyone seems to notices my change of moods and attitudes, but no one has the slightest clue it's you again. I haven't found a cure to this sickness since you've left. How do you think I feel? How do you think it feels to be polluted with doubt again? So, yes, it seems I've lost you: my love, my life, my best friend, But I get the feeling you'll be coming back again. I haven't the time for patching your back up after you're a little frayed. How do you think I feel? How would it feel to be walked all over again? I'm sick of being the cushion you fall back on, When no one else is around. Sick of being the other girl, When you've been shot down. I'm sick of being in love with you, When you just pretend to be. I'm sick of everything about you, And all the lies you tell to me. Although, it still makes no sense to me, I'm telling you I'm through. No, don't think you'll be seeing me again. I haven't any reasons to stick around for you. How will you feel? What will you think when you don't see me waiting again…? (yeah.. I'm not too sure about this.By the way, this is 'poetic goddess of depression' under a different name... just so you know.I used to post here, yah probably don't remember me- but ok- i'll shut up...) "Actions speak louder than words will ever. So I will show you my sincerity in the shape of my still beating heart" |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Well Sara, I remember ya. Glad to see you back around...and writing! "I'm sick of being the cushion you fall back on, When no one else is around. Sick of being the other girl, When you've been shot down. I'm sick of being in love with you, When you just pretend to be. I'm sick of everything about you, And all the lies you tell to me." This is a pretty good poem all by itself. |
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princessdani3122 Junior Member
since 2003-05-14
Posts 18 |
I keep crying,hoping memories will bleed out from my eyes I absolutly LOVE that line ! danielle |
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stupefied Junior Member
since 2003-04-26
Posts 12dead america |
wow, has a very strong feeling to it. i like it. keep writing, i'd like to read more of your stuff, you have a unique style, until next time...goodbye... "sticks and stones are hard on bones aimed with angry art...words can sting like anything but silence...SILENCE BREAKS THE HEART..." |
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