Dark Poetry #3 |
No means No |
ladypisces76 Junior Member
since 2003-05-16
Posts 10Maine,USA |
Why did you touch me when I said no? I only said I would stay for dinner but than I would have to go. You would'nt let me leave you begged me to stay I thought to myself I have to get away. The things you did I wont forget; because of them you have lost my respect. You need to learn that no means no you should have stopped and let me go. My body will heal and the pain will be gone but the memory of that night will forever live on. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LadyPisces~ This is a strong message that should be shared with ALL women ! And it should be tattoo'd on every man's forehead ! Welcome to Passions~ We've many, many rooms in this poetic mansion~ Hope you'll enjoy them all~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*` ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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xmutexelationx Junior Member
since 2003-05-16
Posts 15AmongstTheCharredFieldsOfSnow |
A very tragic first post. Rape, sexual harassment, and such, is all just... horrid. I hope this poem doesn't come from experience, and if it does, I (as well as you) hope all heals. Either way, it was a good poem. Best of luck, ..Sara "Actions speak louder than words will ever. So I will show you my sincerity in the shape of my still beating heart" |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
WoW, this is deep, I feel it!! Great write, great flow, great message!! ELMO "No man is EVER worth my tears, and the one who is, will never make me cry!" [This message has been edited by qtpieelmo (05-17-2003 07:38 PM).] |
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SparkleeLipGloss Junior Member
since 2003-05-18
Posts 19Arizona, USA |
Amazing.. great message yet sad all at the same time.. I loved it.. |
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