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ladypisces76
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since 2003-05-16
Posts 10
Maine,USA

0 posted 2003-05-16 07:17 PM



Why did you touch me when I said no?
I only said I would stay for dinner
but than I would have to go.
You would'nt let me leave
you begged me to stay
I thought to myself I have to get away.
The things you did I wont forget;
because of them you have lost my respect.
You need to learn that no means no
you should have stopped and let me go.
My body will heal and the pain will be gone
but the memory of that night will forever live on.


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1 posted 2003-05-16 09:43 PM


LadyPisces~
This is a strong message that should be shared with ALL women !
And it should be tattoo'd on every man's forehead !

Welcome to Passions~
We've many, many rooms in this poetic mansion~
Hope you'll enjoy them all~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*`

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xmutexelationx
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since 2003-05-16
Posts 15
AmongstTheCharredFieldsOfSnow
2 posted 2003-05-17 12:48 PM


A very tragic first post.  Rape, sexual harassment, and such, is all just... horrid.  I hope this poem doesn't come from experience, and if it does, I (as well as you) hope all heals.  Either way, it was a good poem.

Best of luck,

..Sara

"Actions speak louder than words will ever.  So I will show you my sincerity in the shape of my still beating heart"
~from.autumn.to.ashes~

qtpieelmo
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since 2000-07-04
Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY
3 posted 2003-05-17 07:37 PM


WoW, this is deep, I feel it!! Great write, great flow, great message!!


ELMO


"No man is EVER worth my tears, and the one who is, will never make me cry!"

[This message has been edited by qtpieelmo (05-17-2003 07:38 PM).]

SparkleeLipGloss
Junior Member
since 2003-05-18
Posts 19
Arizona, USA
4 posted 2003-05-18 01:02 AM


Amazing.. great message yet sad all at the same time.. I loved it..
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