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Tears Part1
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Tears Part1 |
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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden 
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You say you care but I know you don't. You never have, never will. You can't see what I don't show you, you can't hear the strange shrill. You won't care even if I try. It'll take me to many years. You can't see them as they fall from my eyes. All those red colored tears. I wish people would stop telling me that I can do anything I want to. I never thought that I couldn't. |
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gjam Member
since 2000-08-23
Posts 85Arkansas |
I liked this...to me it represented the worst possible ending of my last post..this is good I liked it alot.. |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
oh Allysa  talk to me, ok? So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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MiseryDivine Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 114Chicago! en america...oh lala! i wish i lived in England.....(sigh) |
i really liked this....i can relate oh so well....great poem |
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Jeremy Redinger Junior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 46 |
It hurts, people you care about, but who do not care back. Say it, don't say it, it doesn't matter... Show it. That's what we really want. It's a great poem, and it reflects the way things have been going for me recently. Thank you for writing it. |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
sometimes I just scream inside my head "it doesn't matter! it doesn't matter!" because I don't really care what other people think, I'm gonna do whatever I want to do anyways. |
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