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Dark Poetry #3

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Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

0 posted 2003-05-07 12:22 PM

You think I was done?
The fun is just begun,

Check out these rhymes,
Each one written,
With your lies,

Feeding on your mind,
I curl up like a worm,
You never took the time to learn,

In the end you wish-
For help from god,
Yet, you receive a devil’s kiss,

The end is nowhere -
No, near at all,
Your feelings I do not care,

Let your blood boil,
As your sanity coils…

[This message has been edited by Xeonox (05-07-2003 12:23 AM).]

teenpoet
Member

since 2001-10-17

Posts 280
Michigan

1 posted 2003-05-07 11:08 AM

So you definitely have a problem with somone. But you wrote it well. Personally I feel the same way a lot.

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

2 posted 2003-05-08 02:22 PM

nice

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