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Price to Pay. |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA 
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Look again, In the mirror of shame, Time and life, You have not gain, Sit here and listen, To the winds of your heart, Who slowly tell- How you will depart, Do not be, For you are near, All of your wishes, Will never appear, What you gain once, And lost twice, Your sanity, A heavy price. [This message has been edited by Xeonox (05-03-2003 02:24 AM).] |
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AlostHeart Member
since 2003-05-01
Posts 78Wisconsin, U.S. |
A good ryme.  Could be patched up a little maybe.  |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
could use just a tweek but otherwise good job on htis one! |
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