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Tomer
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since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168
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0 posted 2003-05-05 12:51 PM



I lost myself,
you know those circles around my soul,
as my winded night of dreary came.

Collapsed upon the ballroom fever,
to whisk her scarf around my shoulder,
as I tamely cradle her devine sculpture.

We walk on seasoned trails,
falling prey to the changed shadow,
but I regain her possession through one windy scowl.

Try my hand,
take it to the eve of spring,
as she subsides in her field of dreams.

A field that I grow upon,
while her eyes contain me,
keeping me faintly somber.

She relies on my right shoulder,
my left to far to nest on,
but both a necessity to our bond.

A bond like an apple fathered by a tree like clover.

© Copyright 2003 Tomer Fried - All Rights Reserved
Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136
Mobile, AL
1 posted 2003-05-06 12:15 PM


this should be somewhere closer to the top.

Enjoyed.

You could hurt me with your bare hands. You could hurt me using the sharp edge of what you say. JEWEL

teenpoet
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since 2001-10-17
Posts 280
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2 posted 2003-05-06 10:59 AM


Great Job.  More poeple ought to read this.  I like it.

"life is crazy sometimes, and you can't do anything about that.  Just hang on tight and enjoy it.  If you have to scream sometimes, just don't cry I h

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