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Dark Poetry #3

I Call

WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

0 posted 2003-05-04 08:54 AM

You've drawn the dark veil again
over my eyes, my heart, and
there is no end, to the berating
and grating, of your words.

Though in fact this liturgy
has been heard, before, and
now, and I'm sure again,
for there simply, plainly
is no end. And truth be told
I've had enough. The rough,
the tough, the sickening bluff...

I call, you're out, I win.

WhiteRose 05/04/03

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2003-05-05 11:09 AM

I know the feeling, Anne.
expressed well

hugs
M

RavenEye
Junior Member

since 2003-05-02

Posts 29
Ohio, USA

2 posted 2003-05-05 03:56 PM

Hello White Rose,

Well written poem. I know the sentiments, exactly! Keep faith!

Bye,

RavenEye

Keep faith, hold your dreams in your palm of your hand as you reach for your goals!

wings of the moon
Member

since 2003-03-27

Posts 323
Pink bubblegum land

3 posted 2003-05-05 05:48 PM

wow, some powerful piece rose...

take care...

love,
Claire x

"more than yesterday, less than tomorrow, i love you"

wings of the moon
Member

since 2003-03-27

Posts 323
Pink bubblegum land

4 posted 2003-05-10 06:13 AM

"more than yesterday, less than tomorrow, i love you"

Kahlil
Senior Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

5 posted 2003-05-10 10:53 AM

I know this scene, you describe it so well. I applaud your self-empowerment. Take care.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

6 posted 2003-05-10 07:00 PM

Anne:

I am proud of you for this

amazing write
xxoo

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