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BOWIE EYES
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BOWIE EYES |
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G. A. Webb Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441Stanton, California, USA |
An angel walked Into my world That came with great surprise With her I talked As my heart swirled Lost in Bowie eyes An eye of brown An eye of blue Hypnotic is her stare If she were down What I would do Is sing these words I share Her smile could melt The coldest heart And fill it with such glee My soul it knelt As I impart These thoughts I have in me Praying now Is all I can do Though none can sympathize If only somehow I wish she knew How I love her Bowie eyes G. A. Webb 04/25/03 Regret not that which you have done, Rather that which you haven't [This message has been edited by G. A. Webb (04-26-2003 05:30 PM).] |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
Awe this is sweet!! I love it!!  ELMO "No man is EVER worth my tears, and the one who is, will never make me cry!" |
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stupefied Junior Member
since 2003-04-26
Posts 12dead america |
i love it and it's great. but i'm afraid you made a couple spelling errors. angle is really spelled angel and preying, is spelled praying. but otherwise it's great! "sticks and stones are hard on bones aimed with angry art...words can sting like anything but silence...SILENCE BREAKS THE HEART... |
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G. A. Webb Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441Stanton, California, USA |
ptpieelmo: Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. I saw a vision and had to write about it. Thanks again!  stupefied: Well I guess I'm the one who's "stupefied"...lol...thanks for catching those. Too bad I already sent it to her. Hopefully she doesn't think me a moron...lol! Thanks, I'm glad you liked it errors and all. G Regret not that which you have done, |
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StephyBob07 Junior Member
since 2003-04-18
Posts 37Texas |
such a sweet, beautiful poem! great job! ~stephy "...and poets are born knowing the language of angels." -Madeline L'Engle |
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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk |
this one attracted me with the title as i am a bowie fan. greaat poem very meaningful. i enjoyed it a lot, hugs june x |
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G. A. Webb Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441Stanton, California, USA |
shephybob07: Thank you, I'm glad you liked it. junemac: And I thank you as well. I too am a Bowie fan. I have 23 of his CD's. So I guess that qualifies for "fan" status...lol! Thanks again! G Regret not that which you have done, |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Well, I found another of your poems. I like Bowie, too. This is a sweet poem. I hope that she liked it. Thanks Ethel |
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G. A. Webb Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441Stanton, California, USA |
Thank you for looking more into my work, I'm honored. I don't know if she liked it or not. I e-mailed it to her and never heard from her again. But at least I got a cute piece out of it, and not so dark for that matter...lol! Anyways, thank you again, I'm glad you liked it! Regret not that which you have done, |
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