Dark Poetry #3 |
hate you |
MellonCollie Member
since 2003-04-11
Posts 117Austria,Europe |
hate you for your happiness hate you for beeing fake hate you for what you represent your everything that i don't want to be hate you for living one big lie hate you for not telling the truth hate you for your political correctness your everything that i don't want to be hate you for your selfishness hate you for your friends hate you for your happy live your everything that i can never be how will i laugh tomorrow |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
someone didn't wake up on the right side of the bed |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
Hmmm, now how did this one slip past me? lol--Another great expression of yourself, I've felt much of this same hate before!! Great work!! ELMO P.S. I think you meant "happy life" though instead of "happy live", & beeing is spelt being. I'm not being critical, I'm just trying to help you out [This message has been edited by qtpieelmo (04-26-2003 09:56 PM).] |
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Jager Junior Member
since 2003-04-27
Posts 12Event Horizon |
I feel your anger man. |
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MellonCollie Member
since 2003-04-11
Posts 117Austria,Europe |
Thanx you all three... and Elmo, thanx for showin' me my mistakes need to contact a moderator to delete the mistakes how will i laugh tomorrow |
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tornskirt Member
since 2003-03-30
Posts 87 |
hate you for your happy live? otherwise, very good never leave the light on if you don't want to be found |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
Just go to edit MellonCollie & you can fix it yourself!! ELMO "No man is EVER worth my tears, and the one who is, will never make me cry!" |
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MellonCollie Member
since 2003-04-11
Posts 117Austria,Europe |
tornskirt: i wanted to express that some people have a happy live, but I don't... Elmo: Can' edit it anymore...it says: Sorry, but editing is only allowed for 24 hours after the original posting. Please contact a Moderator for help. how will i laugh tomorrow |
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