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MellonCollie Member
since 2003-04-11
Posts 117Austria,Europe 
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if I could look inside all i’d see are dark spots on my mind i’d see that my feelings have died for real beauty I’m blind i’ve locked the door to my inner eye threw away the key can anyone tell me why will it ever be free seems like my world is dying fells like I’m left alone are these the reasons I can’t stop crying are these the reasons my heart is hard as stone how will i laugh tomorrow when i can't even smile today [This message has been edited by MellonCollie (04-21-2003 04:43 PM).] |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
...nice, sad... I like this line i’ve locked the door to my inner eye |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
I love this!! Again you've brought tears to my eyes!!  I especially like the last line, it's soo true, through all the hurt the heart grows stronger & harder, more resistant to letting anyone in!!   ELMO |
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IcyFlamez89 Member
since 2003-02-14
Posts 292Jersey City NJ |
plain BEAUTIFUL. Enough to melt my cold heart even...u must be good |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Mellon: amazing - hard as stone - ahhh - trust me the struggle though it seems endless - in between you find glimpses of yourself Great write xxoo |
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Lost_Soul Junior Member
since 2003-04-17
Posts 37California, United States |
very good. I really liked it. |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
desperate and sad...good writing |
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blackandwhitehorizon Member
since 2003-05-05
Posts 183an akward state of mind |
i liked it a lot |
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