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MellonCollie
Member

since 2003-04-11

Posts 117
Austria,Europe

0 posted 2003-04-19 08:19 PM

felt so much pain
came down on me like frozen rain
but in some way i wish it won't quit
cause for some sick reason
i need it

makes me feel alive
helps me to feel my live
helps me to grow strong
helps me to get along
though i know it is wrong

but i need it
to feel
at all...

how will i laugh tomorrow
when i can't even smile today

tornskirt
Member

since 2003-03-30

Posts 87

1 posted 2003-04-19 08:20 PM

yay! i was just thinking about how i wanted to read one of your poems... great work! i can totally relate

never leave the light on if you don't want to be found

MellonCollie
Member

since 2003-04-11

Posts 117
Austria,Europe

2 posted 2003-04-19 08:35 PM

thanx...i was kinda worried if anybody can understand my feelings, for sometimes i don't even understand'em

how will i laugh tomorrow
when i can't even smile today

tornskirt
Member

since 2003-03-30

Posts 87

3 posted 2003-04-20 10:09 AM

that's how a lot of things are, but sometimes it's not your not understanding, but instead your inability to put into words your emotions... anyway

never leave the light on if you don't want to be found

qtpieelmo
Senior Member

since 2000-07-04

Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY

4 posted 2003-04-20 01:42 PM

Loved this MellonCollie!! Can anyone really ever explain their feelings? I think you understand yours perfectly if you can write about them so beautifully here!!

ELMO

MellonCollie
Member

since 2003-04-11

Posts 117
Austria,Europe

5 posted 2003-04-20 01:50 PM

Thanx Elmo...you really know how to cheer somebody up

how will i laugh tomorrow
when i can't even smile today

StephyBob07
Junior Member

since 2003-04-18

Posts 37
Texas

6 posted 2003-04-20 04:35 PM

wow. i totally understand your feelings. thats why you're here! lol. newayz, i can tell u have talent in writing so send in lots more! ~stephy

Dreaming is the best thing you can do.

IcyFlamez89
Member

since 2003-02-14

Posts 292
Jersey City NJ

7 posted 2003-04-20 11:15 PM

Like I said b4, you're way too simliar to me for it to be comfortable. you've been stalking me or we're psychically joined. (lollz, j/k). Great write. I don't think I can say "I can relate" to you, cuzz I think you're really me! keep writing so I can make sure if it's all been a coincidence or we really have one brain.

MellonCollie
Member

since 2003-04-11

Posts 117
Austria,Europe

8 posted 2003-04-21 05:14 AM

Thanx StephyBob07
@ IcyFlamez89:You've ever seen or read "Fight Club"...

how will i laugh tomorrow
when i can't even smile today

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