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qtpieelmo
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since 2000-07-04
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Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY

0 posted 2003-04-17 09:38 AM



TO LIVE...
It shouldn't really matter,
half empty, half full,
but rather to work,
at making it whole.
To live is to see light,
in all that is dark.
To find peace amongst the silence.
To love a broken heart.
To see the truth,
behind a lie.
To savor life,
not just let it pass by.
To learn the reason,
behind a tear,
instead of just worrying,
about wiping it clear.
To give a smile,
to those who are sad.
To laugh a little,
before you get too mad.
To stop and think,
before you begin.
To lose a couple,
before you win.
Rain or shine,
hugs 'n kisses or burns,
slow down sometimes,
enjoy life's twists and turns.
Find Completeness.
Give it your best try.
Be open and forgiving.
Live before you die!


"When you came into this world everyone around you was smiling and you were crying.Live life so that when you leave this world everyone is crying and you are the one smiling!!"


ELMO



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MellonCollie
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since 2003-04-11
Posts 117
Austria,Europe
1 posted 2003-04-17 10:54 AM


Well, what can I say, love it. I like the opptimistic touch of the poem. In some way it reminded me of Hamlet's soliloquy
To be, or not to be,
there is the line To die,-to sleep,-to sleep! perchance to dream...
maybe I just associate your title with this line, dunno...

how will i laugh tomorrow
when i can't even smile today

qtpieelmo
Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY
2 posted 2003-04-17 01:00 PM


Yea, thought we could all use a little hope, to lift our spirits in here!! Thanx for replying, keeps me smilin'!!


ELMO

MellonCollie
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since 2003-04-11
Posts 117
Austria,Europe
3 posted 2003-04-17 05:23 PM


Yeah, thats right, for sure!!!

how will i laugh tomorrow
when i can't even smile today

karebear07
Member
since 2003-04-15
Posts 64
Texas
4 posted 2003-04-17 06:31 PM


That was awesome, I agree we need to enjoy life a little better and get along with its twist and turns.
          -Kara <><

qtpieelmo
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since 2000-07-04
Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY
5 posted 2003-04-17 08:14 PM


Thanx Kara & Mellon--I love this place!!


ELMO

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6 posted 2003-04-18 06:52 PM


amazing piece to read again
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