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Kahlil
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since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881


0 posted 2003-04-16 11:53 PM


Passionate Outsider

My chance to be alive
Birds fly
Work in the garden beautiful
Trust rests within

Musical energy, fountain and pool
What is stirring
in ocean's silent motion
Suddenly, I’m on the brink

Passion, enacted by force
Force deserves honor
for risk, change, and
sacrifice in turmoil's flow

Our voices, in darkness
awakened me, but
I turned on the lights
and you faded away

I don't have the clutches to grip with
Put everything back in order
The flames have reached beyond me
and I’m wilting here in the fire

It's a free fly!
Off to the moon you go, my love, with your trilliums!
Only to become stardust over my ocean
and start all over again

I long to be alone
Why is it that I stay
Please come back and tell me again
Please just let me sleep through the night
  
Evening wanderings, soul dancers
turmoil's flow
We are all just
passionate outsiders

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Purple Poet On Wheels
Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 145
Pittsburgh/Edinboro, PA
1 posted 2003-04-17 05:05 PM


I read this one because I connected to title.  very nice
Black Swan
Member
since 2003-02-05
Posts 165
on the moon
2 posted 2003-04-17 06:36 PM


"...Musical energy, fountain and pool
What is stirring
in ocean's silent motion..."
yes! i loved those lines. Indeed what is stiring up inside,it's as dark,mysterious and as deep as the ocean.
thanks for sharing
~Talia

StephyBob07
Junior Member
since 2003-04-18
Posts 37
Texas
3 posted 2003-04-18 03:19 PM


very nice. i luv that- "passionate outsider".
~stephy

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