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Passionate Outsider
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Passionate Outsider |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Passionate Outsider My chance to be alive Birds fly Work in the garden beautiful Trust rests within Musical energy, fountain and pool What is stirring in ocean's silent motion Suddenly, I’m on the brink Passion, enacted by force Force deserves honor for risk, change, and sacrifice in turmoil's flow Our voices, in darkness awakened me, but I turned on the lights and you faded away I don't have the clutches to grip with Put everything back in order The flames have reached beyond me and I’m wilting here in the fire It's a free fly! Off to the moon you go, my love, with your trilliums! Only to become stardust over my ocean and start all over again I long to be alone Why is it that I stay Please come back and tell me again Please just let me sleep through the night Evening wanderings, soul dancers turmoil's flow We are all just passionate outsiders |
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Purple Poet On Wheels Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 145Pittsburgh/Edinboro, PA |
I read this one because I connected to title. very nice |
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Black Swan Member
since 2003-02-05
Posts 165on the moon |
"...Musical energy, fountain and pool What is stirring in ocean's silent motion..." yes! i loved those lines. Indeed what is stiring up inside,it's as dark,mysterious and as deep as the ocean. thanks for sharing  ~Talia |
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StephyBob07 Junior Member
since 2003-04-18
Posts 37Texas |
very nice. i luv that- "passionate outsider". ~stephy |
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