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vladacar
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since 2003-04-16
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0 posted 2003-04-16 11:19 PM



Hello everyone,

Let’s play and write a story or a poem. Please add a word, phrase or thought. So, please, hit reply, copy the text that already exists (last edited) and write a dash (-) and then your thought. Please limit yourself to 2-3 words. Use signs of punctuation if you want. I am looking forward to see results… Please consider other people thoughts and contribute with yours.  Thanks. I will start.

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Kahlil
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since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881

1 posted 2003-04-16 11:54 PM


ok, you start.  ;-)
vladacar
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2 posted 2003-04-16 11:58 PM


-my future
Local Parasite
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since 2001-11-05
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Transylconia, Winnipeg
3 posted 2003-04-16 11:59 PM


continues to slip
Kahlil
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since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881

4 posted 2003-04-17 12:07 PM


from my plan
Kahlil
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since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881

5 posted 2003-04-17 12:08 PM


My future
continues to slip
from my plan


rcl 4eva
Junior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 19

6 posted 2003-04-17 01:00 AM


My future
Continues to slip
From my plan
-Many wrong turns

Jessica
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since 2001-06-28
Posts 350
South AL
7 posted 2003-04-17 01:26 AM


My future
Continues to slip
From my plan
-Many wrong turns
----------------------------
My future
Continues to slip
From my plan
A constant trip

Many wrong turns


?

[This message has been edited by Jessica (04-17-2003 01:28 AM).]

Kahlil
Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881

8 posted 2003-04-17 08:12 AM


My future
Continues to slip
-From my hands
A constant trip
Many wrong turns

wranx
Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn
9 posted 2003-04-17 09:10 AM


My future
Continues to slip
-From my hands
A constant trip
Many wrong turns
Have taken me

OpaqueView
New Member
since 2003-04-16
Posts 9
North Carolina
10 posted 2003-04-17 09:18 AM


My future
Continues to slip
-From my hands
A constant trip
Many wrong turns
Have taken me
to my personal hell

qtpieelmo
Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY
11 posted 2003-04-17 09:50 AM


My future,
Continues to slip
From my hands
A constant trip
Many wrong turns
Have taken me
to my personal hell
* A place I've gotten to know,
all too well.

MellonCollie
Member
since 2003-04-11
Posts 117
Austria,Europe
12 posted 2003-04-17 11:00 AM


My future,
Continues to slip
From my hands
A constant trip
Many wrong turns
Have taken me
to my personal hell
A place I've gotten to know,
all too well.
*I've lost the struggle to escape

vladacar
New Member
since 2003-04-16
Posts 6

13 posted 2003-04-19 06:31 PM


My future,
Continues to slip
From my hands
A constant trip
Many wrong turns
Have taken me
to my personal hell
A place I've gotten to know,
all too well.
*I've lost the struggle to escape

Ringo
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since 2003-02-20
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Saluting with misty eyes
14 posted 2003-04-19 09:47 PM


My future,
Continues to slip
From my hands
A constant trip
Many wrong turns
Have taken me
to my personal hell
A place I've gotten to know,
all too well.
I've lost the struggle to escape
*If I have ever struggled at all*

When the morning cries and you don't know why...

Eromyna
Member
since 2002-11-29
Posts 306
Pheonix, AZ, USA
15 posted 2003-04-20 08:59 AM


My future,
Continues to slip
From my hands
A constant trip
Many wrong turns
Have taken me
to my personal hell
A place I've gotten to know,
all too well.
I've lost the struggle to escape
*If I have ever struggled at all*

It's only deeper I manage to writhe

Paragon
Member
since 2003-02-16
Posts 114

16 posted 2003-05-05 10:17 PM


into the masses
wranx
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since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn
17 posted 2003-05-05 11:24 PM


My future,
Continues to slip
From my hands
A constant trip
Many wrong turns
Have taken me
to my personal hell
A place I've gotten to know,
all too well.
I've lost the struggle to escape
If I have ever struggled at all

It's only deeper I manage to writhe
into the masses
*of iniquity that I've left behind

[This message has been edited by wranx (05-05-2003 11:28 PM).]

Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136
Mobile, AL
18 posted 2003-05-06 12:01 PM


My future,
Continues to slip
From my hands
A constant trip
Many wrong turns
Have taken me
to my personal hell
A place I've gotten to know,
all too well.
I've lost the struggle to escape
If I have ever struggled at all

It's only deeper I manage to writhe
into the masses
*of iniquity that I've left behind
I have inflicted scars on the soul of hope.

You could hurt me with your bare hands. You could hurt me using the sharp edge of what you say. JEWEL

Sikanda
Member
since 2002-10-08
Posts 54

19 posted 2003-05-06 02:18 PM



-- I have killed the heart that has given me life

SCREAMIN
Member
since 2003-04-28
Posts 51
US, Tx
20 posted 2003-05-06 11:07 PM


My future,
Continues to slip
From my hands
A constant trip
Many wrong turns
Have taken me
to my personal hell
A place I've gotten to know,
all too well.
I've lost the struggle to escape
If I have ever struggled at all

It's only deeper I manage to writhe
into the masses
of iniquity that I've left behind
I have inflicted scars on the soul of hope.
I have killed the heart that has given me life
*I've seen such evil, and heard no truth


AlostHeart
Member
since 2003-05-01
Posts 78
Wisconsin, U.S.
21 posted 2003-05-07 12:09 PM


I only wish I could Pass into the light.
Sikanda
Member
since 2002-10-08
Posts 54

22 posted 2003-05-07 02:52 PM


My future,
Continues to slip
From my hands
A constant trip
Many wrong turns
Have taken me
to my personal hell
A place I've gotten to know,
all too well.
I've lost the struggle to escape
If I have ever struggled at all
It's only deeper I manage to writhe
into the masses
of iniquity that I've left behind
I have inflicted scars on the soul of hope.
I have killed the heart that has given me life
I've seen such evil, and heard no truth
I only wish I could Pass into the light.

-- Death it seems is the only comfort left

Chameleon
Member
since 2002-08-07
Posts 99
Australia
23 posted 2003-05-08 03:25 AM


My future,
Continues to slip
From my hands
A constant trip
Many wrong turns
Have taken me
to my personal hell
A place I've gotten to know,
all too well.
I've lost the struggle to escape
If I have ever struggled at all
It's only deeper I manage to writhe
into the masses
of iniquity that I've left behind
I have inflicted scars on the soul of hope.
I have killed the heart that has given me life
I've seen such evil, and heard no truth
I only wish I could Pass into the light.
Death it seems is the only comfort left,

--as I am invisible to the eye and confined to recesses amd cracks, I hide in the light.

Kahlil
Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881

24 posted 2003-05-14 12:00 PM



*what is that light that shines from afar

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