Dark Poetry #3 |
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let's write something together |
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vladacar New Member
since 2003-04-16
Posts 6 |
Hello everyone, Let’s play and write a story or a poem. Please add a word, phrase or thought. So, please, hit reply, copy the text that already exists (last edited) and write a dash (-) and then your thought. Please limit yourself to 2-3 words. Use signs of punctuation if you want. I am looking forward to see results… Please consider other people thoughts and contribute with yours. Thanks. I will start. |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
ok, you start. ;-) |
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vladacar New Member
since 2003-04-16
Posts 6 |
-my future |
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Local Parasite![]()
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
continues to slip |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
from my plan |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
My future continues to slip from my plan |
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rcl 4eva Junior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 19 |
My future Continues to slip From my plan -Many wrong turns |
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Jessica![]()
since 2001-06-28
Posts 350South AL |
My future Continues to slip From my plan -Many wrong turns ---------------------------- My future Continues to slip From my plan A constant trip Many wrong turns ![]() [This message has been edited by Jessica (04-17-2003 01:28 AM).] |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
My future Continues to slip -From my hands A constant trip Many wrong turns |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
My future Continues to slip -From my hands A constant trip Many wrong turns Have taken me |
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OpaqueView New Member
since 2003-04-16
Posts 9North Carolina |
My future Continues to slip -From my hands A constant trip Many wrong turns Have taken me to my personal hell |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
My future, Continues to slip From my hands A constant trip Many wrong turns Have taken me to my personal hell * A place I've gotten to know, all too well. |
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MellonCollie Member
since 2003-04-11
Posts 117Austria,Europe |
My future, Continues to slip From my hands A constant trip Many wrong turns Have taken me to my personal hell A place I've gotten to know, all too well. *I've lost the struggle to escape |
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vladacar New Member
since 2003-04-16
Posts 6 |
My future, Continues to slip From my hands A constant trip Many wrong turns Have taken me to my personal hell A place I've gotten to know, all too well. *I've lost the struggle to escape |
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Ringo![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
My future, Continues to slip From my hands A constant trip Many wrong turns Have taken me to my personal hell A place I've gotten to know, all too well. I've lost the struggle to escape *If I have ever struggled at all* When the morning cries and you don't know why... |
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Eromyna Member
since 2002-11-29
Posts 306Pheonix, AZ, USA |
My future, Continues to slip From my hands A constant trip Many wrong turns Have taken me to my personal hell A place I've gotten to know, all too well. I've lost the struggle to escape *If I have ever struggled at all* It's only deeper I manage to writhe |
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Paragon Member
since 2003-02-16
Posts 114 |
into the masses |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
My future, Continues to slip From my hands A constant trip Many wrong turns Have taken me to my personal hell A place I've gotten to know, all too well. I've lost the struggle to escape If I have ever struggled at all It's only deeper I manage to writhe into the masses *of iniquity that I've left behind [This message has been edited by wranx (05-05-2003 11:28 PM).] |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
My future, Continues to slip From my hands A constant trip Many wrong turns Have taken me to my personal hell A place I've gotten to know, all too well. I've lost the struggle to escape If I have ever struggled at all It's only deeper I manage to writhe into the masses *of iniquity that I've left behind I have inflicted scars on the soul of hope. You could hurt me with your bare hands. You could hurt me using the sharp edge of what you say. JEWEL |
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Sikanda Member
since 2002-10-08
Posts 54 |
-- I have killed the heart that has given me life |
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SCREAMIN Member
since 2003-04-28
Posts 51US, Tx |
My future, Continues to slip From my hands A constant trip Many wrong turns Have taken me to my personal hell A place I've gotten to know, all too well. I've lost the struggle to escape If I have ever struggled at all It's only deeper I manage to writhe into the masses of iniquity that I've left behind I have inflicted scars on the soul of hope. I have killed the heart that has given me life *I've seen such evil, and heard no truth |
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AlostHeart Member
since 2003-05-01
Posts 78Wisconsin, U.S. |
I only wish I could Pass into the light. |
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Sikanda Member
since 2002-10-08
Posts 54 |
My future, Continues to slip From my hands A constant trip Many wrong turns Have taken me to my personal hell A place I've gotten to know, all too well. I've lost the struggle to escape If I have ever struggled at all It's only deeper I manage to writhe into the masses of iniquity that I've left behind I have inflicted scars on the soul of hope. I have killed the heart that has given me life I've seen such evil, and heard no truth I only wish I could Pass into the light. -- Death it seems is the only comfort left |
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Chameleon Member
since 2002-08-07
Posts 99Australia |
My future, Continues to slip From my hands A constant trip Many wrong turns Have taken me to my personal hell A place I've gotten to know, all too well. I've lost the struggle to escape If I have ever struggled at all It's only deeper I manage to writhe into the masses of iniquity that I've left behind I have inflicted scars on the soul of hope. I have killed the heart that has given me life I've seen such evil, and heard no truth I only wish I could Pass into the light. Death it seems is the only comfort left, --as I am invisible to the eye and confined to recesses amd cracks, I hide in the light. |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
*what is that light that shines from afar |
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