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Black Swan
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since 2003-02-05
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on the moon

0 posted 2003-04-14 05:13 AM


Giving myself hell
inducing my own blatent suffering
losing myself in
the darkness on the path
of self-discovery

No one can help me now
this is my own battle
didn't really fight too hard
so I have myself to blame
for any misunderstanding

I won't sleep tonight
thinking way too hard
and if I do
nightmares of regret
slaughter my security

I simply want to rest
I simply want to breathe
not another labored step
of self loathing pitty

Opening my eyes
to the site I am merely trying to escape
when there's no way out
my only option is change

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Georgia
1 posted 2003-04-15 06:36 PM


looking inside ourselves is where we find the greatest darkness sometimes
Jessica
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2 posted 2003-04-16 08:31 PM


I absolutely loved this!!  I felt every single word... we are much alike it seems. Thanks for the heart-felt read.  
~Jessa

karebear07
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since 2003-04-15
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3 posted 2003-04-17 06:33 PM


Self discovery, wow i can relate i have had to change. this really helped. -Kara <><
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