i wrote this when i was depressed, can you tell?

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Dark Poetry #3

i wrote this when i was depressed, can you tell?

Fariegirl
Member

since 2003-02-05

Posts 147

0 posted 2003-02-28 08:50 PM

Have you ever seen something out of the corner of your eye,
That thing that you know is there,
That thing that looks over your sholder,
You feel it,
You sence it,
You pretend that it is not there,
But whenever you turn out the lights,
Or when you catch a glimps of a mirror,
You know that it is there,
And it will never leave you.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2003-03-01 01:45 PM

(big hugggssssss) This is so very sad, sweet friend, I too have had that feeling when I was a young boy and I had nightmares and seizures almost every night, and I felt like it was the ghost of the Grim Reaper and wanted to take me away! (sad sigh) I send extra warm angel hugs of healing your way, sweet friend, God Bless You, you have my vote, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

2 posted 2003-03-07 06:28 PM

Yes I could tell and although this is sad, it is the way a lot of us feel at some time in our lives. It will pass but that doesn't make the waiting any easier. Nicely done.

R.E.S.P.E.C.T.
Aretha Franklin

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

3 posted 2003-03-08 11:04 AM

fairie - yes its called paranoia for me - nicely done - check check xxoo

gpc
Junior Member

since 2003-03-01

Posts 43

4 posted 2003-03-08 02:30 PM

Its like when you run for no reason down a dark road. You think ur being followed, you know you aren't but nothing can stop you running.

SPIRIT
Senior Member

since 2002-12-29

Posts 1745
California Desert

5 posted 2003-03-23 11:03 AM

Interesting little post this. Couple of spelling errors that detract somewhat 'shoulder' and 'sense'.

carol
Senior Member

since 2003-01-25

Posts 624
Florida USA

6 posted 2003-04-17 09:34 PM

Very good

Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become
Lots of Love
Rita

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