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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Evening wanderer enraptured and free touches me plays for me Four a.m. soul dancer awakens me robs my dreams plays with me Faerie free float stay on the brink settle for morsels too much to drink Where is the intrigue bring me alive truth glows like fire help me survive Voice of conviction brings you to your knees do you really believe this I want to know please You have a way of calling me back could stay in love not sure what I lack How do you answer sweet soul dancer …most alluring girl romancer… Stand at the threshold bow your head receive the grace your god holds stead That’s where you were when we all fell in love with you… |
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MellonCollie Member
since 2003-04-11
Posts 117Austria,Europe |
That's a nice one...could be a song or somethin'...u should try do make some music for it how will i laugh tomorrow |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
This was my first post, and I was so jittery! I'm a novice poet, and my goal is to write songs. How insightful of you. Thank you so much. |
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MellonCollie Member
since 2003-04-11
Posts 117Austria,Europe |
For real Kahlil, you should to write a piece of music for it!!! I'd love to hear it how will i laugh tomorrow |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Wow, I am so excited to get this kind of response. Maybe I should forward this to my Soul Dancer musician friend. ;-) |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
I luv this & agree that it would make a beautiful song!!--If you are like me, your poems speak to u & inspire u, I can hear a musical beat to my every poem, maybe you can here, go with it, I think its great!!  Hope to see you around  again soon!! ELMO |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Yes, ELMO, my poems speak to me, and over time, remind me of times in my life from which I was able to grow. Sometimes measurable in only a few months! Poems of personal growth are benchmarks, aren't they? |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
ELMO, I forgot to say thank you for responding. It means a lot to me... |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
Yes Anytime Kahlil!!--I'm glad u r here, sharing ur greatness with all of us!! Poetry for me is the only way I know how to express myself, it's kinda like therapy, it doesn't matter if noone else gets it, as long as it holds meaning for yourself & helps u grow, feel better, or whatever!!  ELMO keep sharing, i'd luv to hear more from u!! |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
ELMO speaks truth here....It matters not who "get it" ~wranx "The shortest distance between two points is.....sometimes intolerable" |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
thank you elmo and wranx in your replies. You're right about getting it or not getting it...I think if just one comment in our writing about our pains and joys and life experiences can help another person feel and see, then we've done our job as word artists... |
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Black Swan Member
since 2003-02-05
Posts 165on the moon |
yes Kahlil, u certainly have another fan! You are a natural, I am looking forward to reading more |
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JP Senior Member
since 1999-05-25
Posts 1343Loomis, CA |
Good way to make an entrance. Welcome and well met! Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn. |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Thank you...I'm working at it...you are all so welcoming here... |
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