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WisprWnd Junior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 34 |
No more talking tonight, Through the wall of wet. Just squeeze me in your legs and let me die. Don't take offense to the marks on your back. That was just my devil, wanting to see you cry. But it's not me, it's not me. I swear to god it couldn't be. and we all know what god has to say... No more touching tonight, Let me face your back. I'm happier when you make me cry, But please disobey. I won't dwell on the fact that I'm not enough for you, something new and cold to engulf, In your bloody folds. Let's see what god has to say... No more us tonight, I've made up my naked mind. This is the body that you will miss forever, when the cold night air won't die. As I dressed I heard your beating heart. As I left I heard you start to cry. Oh baby, I cried too you know, Which came as a suprise, cause I thought I had died. But I guess I returned when you got burned. Thanx god... [This message has been edited by WisprWnd (04-13-2003 01:29 PM).] |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
WisprWnd I understand, and I like your words, they are deep and dark....I was really with you, but for some reason I don't get the ending: "But I guess I returned when you got burned. Thanx god..." Or else I'm just tired and I should read again tomorrow. |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
good one! |
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WisprWnd Junior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 34 |
Mabey it was vengence that I needed. And god gave me the courage to burrrrrn the witch. WisprWnd. P.S. Mabey not. |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
 Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become |
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