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LUV_R_GIRL2379
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since 2003-04-09
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0 posted 2003-04-13 01:48 AM


LIAR

Anger,my hidden expression,
when it kills me with depression,
and blood rushes through my veins,
feeling such horrid pain.

My heart races and my face grows hot,
As i realize all the things you are not,
Clenched fists turning white,
Knowing i dont want to fight,
Deep cutting words slashing me,
I turn so your face i can't see,
Because seeing you makes me queasy.

Thunder in my head makes me cry,
Of all the hurtful things you slide by,
Such anger makes me want to demolish,
But how can i be so foolish?
You make me burn like fire,
But to me you are just a liar.

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qtpieelmo
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1 posted 2003-04-13 02:34 PM


I love this, u portray how much hurt/anger it causes to be lied to, soo well!!


ELMO

MellonCollie
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since 2003-04-11
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2 posted 2003-04-13 04:15 PM


i agree with what qtpieelmo said, couldn't have said it better

how will i laugh tomorrow
when i can't even smile today

Brad Majors
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3 posted 2003-04-16 03:10 PM


well done!
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