Dark Poetry #3 |
LIAR! |
LUV_R_GIRL2379 Junior Member
since 2003-04-09
Posts 42 |
LIAR Anger,my hidden expression, when it kills me with depression, and blood rushes through my veins, feeling such horrid pain. My heart races and my face grows hot, As i realize all the things you are not, Clenched fists turning white, Knowing i dont want to fight, Deep cutting words slashing me, I turn so your face i can't see, Because seeing you makes me queasy. Thunder in my head makes me cry, Of all the hurtful things you slide by, Such anger makes me want to demolish, But how can i be so foolish? You make me burn like fire, But to me you are just a liar. |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
I love this, u portray how much hurt/anger it causes to be lied to, soo well!! ELMO |
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MellonCollie Member
since 2003-04-11
Posts 117Austria,Europe |
i agree with what qtpieelmo said, couldn't have said it better how will i laugh tomorrow |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
well done! |
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