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Rose Petals & Thorns |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY 
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Rose Petals & Thorns Your love is like a rose, it's open then it's closed. Double-sided, intertwining, slowly dieing & then reviving. When I think it's dead, it shows some life again. Roots are sprouting, no more pouting. Satin petals caress my skin. Must be gentle, delicate petal, falling apart in my hand. I've lost it once again! A thorn is stuck, blood is drawn, I have no luck, no green thumb. Sprinkle some droplets, to show that I care, it looks pretty lifeless, but the seed is still there. I'll come back tomorrow, my little flower, & bring you back, with all my power!  ELMO[This message has been edited by qtpieelmo (04-04-2003 04:36 PM).] |
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majnu
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
my favorite of yours that i have read. it nice the way you use the color for different parts of the poem. but more than that, the tone and diction were just great. -majnu |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
Thanx!! Its suppose to kinda look like a rose--lol  Thanx for taking the time to read my stuff!! ELMO[This message has been edited by qtpieelmo (04-05-2003 08:58 AM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Yay! Oh Katie, this is beautiful, sweet friend, I just love the shape, I wish the color could be in the book too as truly the love all resides in the root of the rose, where if it is in the soil of the heart it is destined to bloom again! (big hugggssssss) I love this, sweet friend, you have my botanic vote, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Katie, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
awe--Thanx so much Mistletoe--You are definitly the sweetest!!  ELMO |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
I liked this a lot and neat presentation doesn't hurt - my vote is happily cast. |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
nice |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
Awe, Thanx Spirit & Brad!!--That really means a lot to me!!  ELMO |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
Great write Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become Lots of Love Rita [This message has been edited by carol (04-13-2003 11:29 PM).] |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
What a sweet darling compassionate piece.... I really enjoyed the presentation too!!!! Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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MellonCollie Member
since 2003-04-11
Posts 117Austria,Europe |
love tickles & stings...isn't it  great poem again, get's my vote slowly dieing & then reviving i love that line...makes me hope things may change someday... how will i laugh tomorrow |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very nicely said, this write has to be a rose between two thorns!!! |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
Awe, thanx you guyz!!! You are too sweet!! It feels more like a bush of thorns to me--lol ELMO |
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