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Encarta
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since 2002-02-14
Posts 101
My homeland is not of the world
0 posted 2003-03-22 10:10 PM

Just something short that I came up with...It's not good, but there's something I like about it.  Not sure what it is, but it's there.

In the drunken stumble of the night
Fighting for an once of light
The sun rises but too blind to see
Are all our children to be
For in this world of endless sin
Darkness covers where light begins
And evil lurks in every heart
Fighting for its part
In a society destined to fail
But alas this ends the tale.
© Copyright 2003 James M. Hohne - All Rights Reserved
Eromyna
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since 2002-11-29
Posts 306
Pheonix, AZ, USA
1 posted 2003-03-23 09:48 AM

I agree. There's something good about it that's hard to pinpoint.

"I don't need to scream for you to deem me aggravation."
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